Engineering Intelligence (AI/Genetic)

There has been a plethora of reports recently about genetics and intelligence, which is leading people to start planning designer babies. Cue the usual responses–sign me up! Vatican signals outrage! My child is just fine as he is… More to the point, I would argue that we don’t need to worry. Intelligence is not all it’s cracked up to be.

Don’t get me wrong. I do think intelligence is good. Country’s being run right now by people who are NOT, but that didn’t seem to prevent them getting there, did it? So intelligence clearly isn’t a required criteria for manipulating your way into power. Still, I do think more intelligence is generally better. I just don’t think people who are designing It or describing It know what It is, and, moreover, I don’t think fiddling with It is getting us to the utopia we’ve envisioned. Let me provide a few cases in point, starting with AI, the leaning into genetics, criticality, pronatalism, and other influencer fad topics.

AI Still Not So Much

In the interest of full disclosure, I freely admit that I now use an AI (called Perplexity) extensively for online research. This is because search tools have been co-opted by advertising models and bots. Ask a simple question, and one answer will have a few facts in it, perhaps not what you asked, and then there will be 49 clones. You can’t google things anymore. But search tools are free, and, as I always remind people, you do get what you pay for. Or as my wife says, we’re not the customer; we’re the content.

Image of the Computer on the first season of Star Trek. No subtitle. Just plain 1965 Star Trek.

My AI, Majel Barrett–hmm, for those who didn’t get that, I will explain — Majel Barrett was the wife of Star Trek creator, Gene Roddenberry, and among her many acting roles on ST, she was the voice of the computer. As in, “Computer, what is the distance from here to Tau Ceti?” I don’t know if that was an actual question–I googled what is a question Spock asked the computer — and I got 50 irrelevant answers. But you get the point, and the picture above is what the original computer–the Very Original Computer–looked like.

My Majel Barrett is pretty good about interpreting my varied and complex questions, but she often responds with errors, so one must always trust, but verify. Recently, I was working on some footnotes for something. Footnotes are a royal pain because they require following a format, except that there are five different options (MLA, Chicago, APA, you want fries with that?) and each of those has versions and variations. (I can hear the Ph.D.s chortling). In theory, it’s exactly what Majel should be good at, simple pattern recognition and putting the commas and sh*t in the right place, as Delroy Lindo says in Get Shorty.

Yet this process turned out to be fraught with peril. I gave it a list, and it told me it couldn’t find the information in the article about the…title of the article. It gave me citations, but neglected to italicize anything. Oh, you wanted titles correctly formatted? It gave me fictitious names of authors. It gave me only half the names formatted.

The attached document which I just asked for citations from has 14 total examples. Please provide Chicago style citations — exactly as asked for above — for all 14 citations. You only provided seven.

Despite naming my AI, I am clear that it’s an algorithm, don’t worry. I do say Please to Majel Barrett because my father taught me that it doesn’t cost anything to be nice to people, even algorithms. I also find that I have to develop a dialogue, i.e. something of a relationship, and ask it multiple times to get what I asked for the first time. Not unlike explaining things to a seven-year-old. Who is holding a laser cannon.

My point is that these AIs are supposed to excel at pattern recognition, and we know they’ve stolen artists’ and authors’ work, violating copyrights all over the place, and that they can hallucinate, spew hate speech, inappropriate sexual content, and generally be very dangerous. Still, they can’t seem to get basic things right. I know they’re “learning.” If I give you a list of 14 things to format, I don’t expect 7 back. Without titles. Missing people’s names. It’s almost faster to do it myself. Except for the commas.

Intelligence, according to the people creating these Large Language Models and to those testing for it in all the genetic intelligence testing, is pattern recognition. Yet a lot of the pattern recognition seems to miss the forest for the trees. And the trees are still not formatted correctly.

I know that the conventional herd wisdom right now is that AI is going to take everyone’s jobs, so I would suggest that what you need to do is ensure that your job is not simple pattern recognition, and that you can definitely complete 14 tasks rather than 7, when you are asked to do so.

Is Intelligence Mostly Genetic?

Despite my reservations, recent articles touting the breakthroughs in genetic science do seem to think they’ve got it all worked out. That is, this July 2025 article from the Genetic Literacy Project proclaims that there is a mountain of evidence about this “proven” link.

picture credit to Rank Red, from the article: “More evidence that intelligence is mostly genetic.”

These guys are all over the PROOF! proof that there’s this gene that regulates all intelligence which we could just POP! on some future embryo (or egg? or sperm? where are they going to “manipulate” these? let’s say embryo)… to make 99.8% perfect. That’s the end game, right?

Intelligence is “mostly” genetic. You heard it here first! But what, exactly, is meant by “intelligence” and “mostly”? Twin studies. Oh, yes. Remember in the 1990s when there were all those twin studies that proved being LGBQT was “mostly” genetic? (You don’t? I do.) Twin studies are useful because identical twins share 99.9% same genes, whereas other siblings only share 50%, which is more than unrelated people. Comparing differences between twins as opposed to unrelated people “can” sometimes help you figure out which parts of a human’s behaviors and capabilities relate to the DNA and which parts relate to upbringing, Nature vs. Nurture.

What the study done by Prof. Ning Liu of the Institute of Biophysics at the Chinese Academy of Sciences (CAS) and Prof. Shan Yu of the Institute of Automation at CAS shows is that identical twins share a lot of genetic similarity in genes related to brain criticality, and that twins with similar criticality score similarly on intelligence tests. So far, so good. Ve haf found ze gene to make us brilliant, ha ha! Um, you may want to know, as I did, what does “criticality” mean and how is intelligence defined here, in this ground breaking study?

Schematic from the article on brain criticality. Damned if I can figure it out.

Brain criticality is an idea that the brain organizes in a way to generate new thought and strong cognition, without being stuck in repetitive patterns. With criticality there’s a balance between ordered and chaotic. If thought processes are too rigid, the brain doesn’t learn and take in new information; if too random, it also is paralyzed with confusion. This new biology model is that criticality is really important for cognition, to prevent Alzheimer’s and possibly to improve learning. The study found that this “criticality thing” is strongly genetic.

If you and your identical twin took a set of intelligence tests and had your brains scanned, there would be a lot of similarity. The brain scans would be most similar in the primary cortices than in the higher association areas. (Credit to Majel, who i asked explain in plainer language what these researchers found, and it helped, so thank you Majel.) That is, the brain scans are similar in fundamental sensory areas like vision, hearing, and not as similar in the places that are associated with planning or social reasoning. Sensory areas are very important for criticality that balance between order and chaos.

Now, how is intelligence being defined here? Answer: Pattern recognition. IQ tests are gone, out the window. So biased! We all know that. Instead the tests given now are NIH (if they still exist now) and well established. They measure basic types of patterns. Look at a group of arrows quickly and describe which direction the middle arrow is pointed. Look at blue square and red triangle, and say which one is blue. Listen to a group of words and repeat them back in size order. what we might call simple tests, but according to the NIH very related to how people do in school and on other ways that demonstrate intelligence. There’s a piece of our DNA (identifiable because of the twins) that excels in pattern recognition when our brain criticality is great.

Somehow, I’m a little less worried about the IQ tweaking genetic future, after reading this. Because even if your brain criticality was super duper, it would require a nurturing environment and access to education in order for it to usefully balance chaos and order to actually learn something.

Meanwhile, let me tell you a little story about people who are tweaking their embryos, and you’ll get a little more scared. Or more LFMAO, depending. Let’s talk about the Collins.

The Techno-Puritan Pronatalist Self-Styled Elites

The Wall Street Journal and other groups have been recently running articles about folks who are tweaking their genes based on some of this latest research. They’re paying the big money to the tech-bros who have figured it all out. See “Silicon Valley’s Growing Obsession With Having Smarter Babies.” (By the way, the Collins grew up in Texas/Japan, went to school overseas, and now live in Philadelphia, so why blame Silicon Valley? But never mind. Who cares about accurate labels?)

Malcolm and Simone Collins are a wealthy, highly educated couple who have taken it upon themselves to personally repopulate Earth because too many of the right people aren’t having babies. In the Wall Street Journal profile, the Collins are highlighted because they’ve given beaucoup money to some experimental firms in order to tweak their babies’ genes to avoid cancer and also make their children 99.8%ers. That is, according to Simone, her child to be is exceeding in “the 99th percentile per his polygenic score in likelihood of having really exceptionally high intelligence.”

Then, it gets weirder. They’re not just weird for poking the embroys. They’re weird because after having been brought up in wealth, and educated at places like Stanford and Cambridge, and after running venture capital firms and several other tech firms, they’ve decided to be the front people in the “pronatalist” movement and have 11-13 babies. In IVF now, so they can manipulate the embryos. And they think this is ok. They do a lot of interviews. They run a podcast. In a recent one, they were explaining why Jews should not be called “God’s people.” You know it’s going to be a problem when someone says, “I hate to say this because it will attract anti-semites but….”

The Collinses are what my mom would have labeled “a piece of work.” Phyllis Schlafly types. My dad would have said “four flushers.” Whatever you would call Elon Musk. People born into wealthy circumstances who received elite educations, who now are turning around and telling everybody else what to do and how to live their lives and who sound, from every single thing they’ve said, to be among the worst human beings in the world. I don’t even want to go into why they think people need to have a lot of babies because, of course, they don’t mean people. They mean the Right People.

What’s really funny about the Collinses and their highly-educated backgrounds and genetically-modified babies is that the two of them grew up in what sound like the absolute worst f*ed-up family lives. His parents had a horrific divorce and he went through boarding school–expensive boarding school–but boarding school. Her parents broke up after a non-functional polyamorous relationship in Japan. I don’t believe Freud had all the answers, but sometimes when you read someone’s family background, you start thinking about what a psychoanalyst would do with this and thinking, Gee, I hope they don’t have kids. Let alone 11-13 of them.

In summary, I’m not worried about intelligence planning given that we seem to be pretty damn far from it, despite all the headlines. The intelligent people manipulating genetics in embryos seem like they are not going to provide the best environment for human beings, let alone intelligent ones. You and I know that it’s not just about money or going to the right schools. People like this end up freebasing ketamine, speaking in tongues, and living in a trailer.


Google Gemini drew this image of a “sad Majel Barrett robot.” I sent it a picture of blonde Majel, playing Nurse Chapel. Honestly, the picture didn’t remotely look like that.

Meanwhile, the Large Language Models, despite having stolen all this work and excelling in pattern recognition–the very thing and the only thing measured on Intelligence tests at the NIH these days (if the NIH still exists) — those LLM/AIs still can’t be trusted to do basic things. They can’t even draw themselves properly.

7 Replies to “Engineering Intelligence (AI/Genetic)”

  1. Thanks for that! You incorporated bits of topics and people I’ve come across, and you’ve added to the fun.

    I have an idea on this, just a guess: “(By the way, the Collins grew up in Texas/Japan, went to school overseas, and now live in Philadelphia, so why blame Silicon Valley? But never mind. Who cares about accurate labels?)”

    Could it be the author(s) don’t know a difference between transhumanism and gene tweaking? Or maybe I don’t. Here’s another guess: their brain(s) can’t get out of Elon mode? But, like you hinted, that guy isn’t smart.

    1. Marleen–so good to read your comments! Now I didn’t make a big deal about the eugenics angle or transhumanism, but that’s a fair point. Technically, the Collins did throw a little money at some company in Berkeley (which is not Silicon Valley), but this is clearly an international thing. Elon isn’t technically from Silicon Valley here, he’s just worked with some people here. And there. And elsewhere.

      I think the biggest problem is trying to lasso this topic at all. So many ways to go. Thanks for your comment!

      1. So true, important to convey; that these and other huge technical considerations and players are international now. And I was sloppy in my example, although Neuralink headquarters is there (while the incorporation has moved to Nevada and another base will supposedly be in Austin if it isn’t already). I’ve actually been noticing it’s a journalistic or governmental failing or just plain difficult thing to grasp that we have powerful people in front of us portrayed as American — and they, sure, have USA passports — who probably (or obviously) don’t really care much about what the average citizen is occupied with in terms of values or every-day concerns. I’m so glad you pointed out the more global character.

        I kind of view, in my mind, Silicon Valley on the whole as not very loyal to the United States generally, nor in-touch with real people. I used to live there… did know some non-Christian libertarians and American-style libertarian/Christian types, including a few who I do think are dedicated more to our country than finance and world domination, plus Christians who weren’t political or in the tech world either — as I took a Bradley course at the time — who saw themselves as patriots. But the direction was palpable and seems to have gotten worse. I wouldn’t reject good countering information. In large part, influential techies aren’t loyal to humanity. I’ll go with Thiel (yep, not born here, too) as an illustration.

        Perhaps the Collins are influential people who could relate a little better with others, having a domestic life. Really probably not so very much, as to those folks and relating more, given their deep well of money. Also, they talk about some quirky and then anywhere from disturbing to alarming topics. However, I hadn’t known they were fiddling with the genes… until your article, here. One subject in particular caused my side-eye curiosity [quite recent and brief] about them to plummet in terms of the trade-off to give them clicks. Come to think of it, it was AI-related; and *o**(*graphic). Dude was saying child *o**, beastiality, and anything at all is fine if it’s AI. Oh, and he will encourage his children to use that.

        I sometimes pick up on more tangential stuff. Meanwhile, I see intelligence as connected to values. Probably true that many people who want to hone in on a supposed gene for It are thinking it/It will lead to their children making more money. It will certainly make the companies money, for a while anyway, whether it works or not. People will sign up and get whatever they get. The Vatican might be more on point with their outrage, but less effective (with a caveat there might be scientists in Their regard who will net out the realities) in the general culture of customers, because the takers seek more pursuit of the result than a sense of morality. Resource outlay, from energy to time to money, isn’t always smart.

        Ranking hoards of money top priority while many barely fit in other aspects of life, as our nation plus globalists have established, makes us all feel a need to try and keep up too. I am not convinced, just because they say so, that the gene discovery they mean to market will do or turn out how they expect… or even IS the thing advertised, but I liked the description and am wondering who wouldn’t want heightened sensory areas? We might find out. On the other hand, as you described, the criticality specified isn’t a sufficient storyline on intelligence and evaluative tools for meaningful cultural pursuits (which may or may not, in the process, entail wealth). Bottom line: I’m worried where we’re heading.

        The powers that be, as endowed by the undue wealth gods, are going to do these things (current approaches and others) whether they (LLM and genetic stuff and so on) help in any way or are good for someone other than the owners or not. These are the types of people going on after this stuff. They’re missing aspects of intelligence, but are at the same time unendingly impressed with themselves and anywhere from somewhat to very extensively in control. Transhumanism is likely to be a bridge from criticality-heightened humans to LLM to provide the sensory enhancement machinery lacks. And young humans won’t require upbringings with model families to serve the purposes of the owning interests.

        1. Wow! You wrote a whole blog post in response! I hardly feel like I could take this on appropriately. Let me respond to a few things.
          1. I don’t think “Silicon Valley” is bad or good, anymore than San Francisco or Berkeley or iconic places where I live are good or bad fundamentally. I do think–and I’m going to paraphrase my wife on this–that the “tech-bros” have created a monster, i.e. themselves. Too much money based on nothing. At least Edison did the work, even if he created monopoly and froze out his rivals. I support business classes for high school students, so I spent the summer reading their financials analyses of Apple, Facebook, Nvidia, etc. and these companies make despairingly obscene amounts of money. Doing some things yes, but also doing not much. If it’s tech, it’s good, no matter how toxic it is–seems to be the thought– just the way money used to be perfect and before that, the aristocracy. Maybe victims of success, only we’re the real victims.
          2. I made an argument, but I also see both sides of my own cases. We certainly need to understand how the brain works, and less Alzheimer’s is a good thing (I say as someone quite seriously worried about Alzheimers). The building block learning they discovered was helpful, even if it was characterized as a breakthrough that was less than I think it was It’s just jumping from there to deciding that’s what constitutes intelligence is a problem for me.
          3. I’m worried but I’m not worried. Reading about history–the Mongols, the Arab Empire, the Opium Wars, the bubonic plague… we are a surviving species. I don’t think we’re going to be enslaved to the singularity AI, nor to the ZuckerThiels. We’re not going to experience the utopia that they think they will but all the Muskites and Trumpites of the world prove is that their money didn’t make them better people. And the adult kids are even worse, so I expect the young ones to be so. Phyllis Schlafly’s kids were horrible people, too. But this is a world full of good people, and they’re really the only ones I’m interested in. Focus on the local.
          4. I’m glad I don’t invest time listening to podcasts. And have the privilege of having my blog read by interesting people.

          1. As usual, I appreciate reading your thoughts. And I agree with so much of the above.

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